Plz Feedback on my pear formula

[ihbro]

Fructone - 400
Iso E Super - 400
PEA - 300
Ethylene brassy late - 300
Hexyl Acetate - 250
Hedione - 200
Benzyl Acetate - 120
Rose EO - 100
Bergamot EO - 100
Helional - 100
Canlone - 80
Ebanol - 80
Galaxolide - 75
Tonalide - 30
Freesia EO - 30
Hydroxycitronellal - 10
Alpha Damascone - 7
Rose Oxide - 2.5

Total - 2584.5

I can't add more flavoring because I'm afraid the top note will collapse, but when I make it 15%, it lasts too short

And it smells like medicine, but I don't know why

 

[pkiler]

Hi, Whatever is labelled as Freesia EO, is fake.
lose the Calone.
too much rose and PEA.
not enough greens.
How about some pear ester?

 

[parker25mv]

You need something like Peranat as a mainstay in the formula. (Although there are several other similar ACs) Maybe with some Leafovert (Liffarome) or Pear Ester (ethyl deca-2,4-dienoate).
That and the alpha-damascone is what the pear is going to mainly revolve around (although you don't need much damascone since it is potent at low levels).
The traditional AC in a pear smell was ethyl butyrate. Also there is isopropyl methyl-2-butyrate as an alternative.

Small amounts of beta-ionone can also help in the formula (although is not distinctly pear in smell).

Or you could also just consider a Pear Key accord, or pear base.

I think your formula has too many unnecessary things, or has other things at levels that are much too high, if you want the smell of pear.

Also, Helvetolide can be a good choice for a musk if you are desiring a pear smell. However, choosing to include it is not really the most important thing, nor should it be relied upon as the main source of a pear smell, and there are several other much more important issues in your formula you should give attention to first before worrying about that.

 

[mnitabach]

Fructone - 400
Iso E Super - 400
PEA - 300
Ethylene brassy late - 300
Hexyl Acetate - 250
Hedione - 200
Benzyl Acetate - 120
Rose EO - 100
Bergamot EO - 100
Helional - 100
Canlone - 80
Ebanol - 80
Galaxolide - 75
Tonalide - 30
Freesia EO - 30
Hydroxycitronellal - 10
Alpha Damascone - 7
Rose Oxide - 2.5

Total - 2584.5

I can't add more flavoring because I'm afraid the top note will collapse, but when I make it 15%, it lasts too short

And it smells like medicine, but I don't know why

Ebanol can go off & give a nasty scent. Maybe this is related to your "medicinal". And BTW, I agree with Parker above that you should first perfect your "pear" accord on its own, before surrounding it with other stuff (musk, wood, amber, floralizers, etc) to turn it into a complete perfume. And that is an absolute shitton of helional & calone...

 

[steventeddy]

And that is an absolute shitton of helional & calone...

What's a 7% helional + calone among friends? Not to mention ~3.9% rose otto!

You need something like Peranat as a mainstay in the formula.

+1 for Peranat. Harry graciously sent me some at a sample and it smells so nice at 10% on paper. It smells like an abstract pear, though also has a slight leafy aspect to me.